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They said that grief was a strange thing, it tears you apart, leaving scars that are invisible; but they also said that this pain, this dull ache which holds you in its clutches would diminish over time. Then why is it that even after ten years, the pain still seems like a fresh wound, the skin around it like a sore infection, which refuses to heal?
Janet stood near the tombstone of her dead husband and wiped away the tears that had begun to form from the corner of her eyes. He had promised he would be there with her forever; he was the one who held her hand as she battled breast cancer and he was the one who had wiped away her tears and fears as she lost her hair to chemo.
But today, as his tombstone stood blurred before her eyes, she smiled for the first time in a long time seeing the tiny yellow flower which had grown beside it, keeping him company; he was no longer alone and strangely enough, neither was she.
This post is written for Five sentence fiction for Grief at Lillie McFerrin Writes.
Lovely short fiction piece Aathira! Keep it up! :) <3
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Elly!
DeleteBeautiful Aathira! Lovely story there.
ReplyDeleteThanks Reema :)
DeleteSuch a touching, lovely piece of story here. Great work, Aathira!
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DeleteBrilliant take on prompt Aathira. Liked it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Shanx!
DeleteA poignant take. Loved the yellow flower bit.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Alka!
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jyotsna!
DeleteGood one Aathira. It was touching !
ReplyDeleteThanks Anita!
DeleteBeautiful. Very well brought out in so few a words.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jyoti!
DeleteI first felt sadness and then a sense of happiness in those few words. Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Nisha! Glad you liked it!
DeleteBeautiful touching story Aathira..
ReplyDeleteOh wow! No one but you could think of something like this.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely beautiful! :)
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Thanks so much, Soum! :) Hugs!
DeleteYour description of grief, Aathira, is so poignant. The pain does not go away, one simply learns to live with it.
ReplyDeleteYour description of love, Aathira, is heartwarming and touching. Love is about the other - not ourselves.
You description of the beauty of nature is simple - and that is what makes your "five lines" so amazingly powerful.
Well done! HUGS <3
Thanks a ton for your kind comment, Judy! Like I mentioned earlier on FB, your comment has really made my day! Do keep visiting :)
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A touching story but then it brought a smile on my face too:)
ReplyDeleteAnd your comment brought a smile on my face :) Thank you, Anu!
Deletevery touching...
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankita!
DeleteThis speaks about complex emotions...
ReplyDeleteAbout acceptance, love, care, togetherness and many more
Thanks so much, Satya!
Deleteemotional writing
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Thank you, Cifar!
DeleteGrief does heal, it just takes its own time and course. Well penned thoughts!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Keirthana! The pain does lessen over time. At least some of it.
DeleteHugs over this one, dear. The way you've meandered your way from sadness to happiness says it all !!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Sreeja! Hugs back to you :)
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