Don't build me a monument of love when I'm gone
But tell me you love me when I'm alive and alone
Take me down to see the northern lights
Holding my hand throughout the night
Write me a poem, paint me in your words
For love gone by sure hurts
Tomorrow when the whole world forgets
Let us embrace what we have
And eternalize this love forever
Don't tell me what can't be done
Show me that it's never out of reach
Envelop me in your thoughts
Make me pancakes while I'm still in bed
And the coffee, let it go cold while you hold me close
Morning showers, water dripping from my hair
Look at me like never before; sans makeup
Just the way I am - bared to my soul
Eternalize love, not through cliched gestures
But always, always through your words
A very honest portrayal of love, beautiful poem Aathira!
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Deletebeautifully written, love is not about material things but how special you treat someone in your life
ReplyDeleteWords. Oh yes, only through words! :)
ReplyDeleteAlways :)
DeleteWonderful, touching lines, Aathira!
ReplyDeleteThanks Uma!
DeleteSuch wise words, the opposite of what is usually said but holds good just as well :) "Tell me you love me when I'm alive and alone" - lovely, lovely, lovely thought.
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ReplyDeleteThank you Chetta!
DeleteThis is beautiful, Ammu!
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Deleteeternal love...not through cliched gestures....
ReplyDeleteThat sealed it for me. This was beyond beautiful Athira.
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DeleteI love the simplicity :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Love!
DeleteSincere and selfless love. Lingers in every word.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anita :)
Deletei am reading the poem again and again <3 cant get enough of it!
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