Tuesday, September 9, 2014

Second Birth

Image copyright: Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

We looked at each other across the camp fire. It was a full moon night. I can feel the warmth spread across my face. Was it just because of the fire? Or was it because of the passion that threatened to burn me down, reflected in your eyes like burning embers?

The fire has almost died out. The cold wind blowing our way adds to the chill. You come closer, hold me tight and nuzzle my neck. I'm apprehensive. But the pain is sharp; instant. You draw back and I can see your fangs that are tinged with my blood. 

This drabble is written for Friday Fictioneers- 5th September for the above photo prompt. 

28 comments:

  1. Dear A,

    The future looks bleak.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  2. What a story Aathira! Had no clue of the ending throughout. It is simply superb!

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  3. Dear Aathira, Wow - what kind of creature is she staring at? CREEPY good and good tale for a fire. Really terrible outcome, I'm sure. Nan :)

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    1. Thanks so much, Nan! Yes, it's creepy to be alone like that at night with a campfire and a vampire :)

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  4. Aathira, Looks like she succumbed to the wiles of the vampire. Dangerous company to be alone with. Well written. : ) ---Susan

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  5. Turned out to be a very personal Vampire affair. Nicely done.

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  6. Woohooo! Vampire Diaries is back! :D

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    1. I guess! Never tried my hand at vampire tales before :) Thank you, Soum!

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  7. A good one Aathira! :) (Am I the only one wishing that if it had been longer I would've enjoyed it longer ;) ) Cheers.

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    1. Thank you, Shanx :) And, really? Didn't really think about what happens next. I guess it would make an interesting story!

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  8. Vampire without a warning! Chilling... :)

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  9. And I thought this is going to be a mushy love story :D
    Hehehe, I love Vamipires :D

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    1. Thank you, Babe! I love Vampires too, thanks to Elena and Damon! ;)

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  10. You seem to be into the horror genre more these days? Hmm? :P

    Well-written piece, it gave me a vivid visualization and I had to suppress the shiver.

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    1. Not really! Just trying my hand at different genres :) Basically, experimenting!

      Thank you, Keirthana :)

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  11. eekks vampire got her... loved the way you described their feelings... loved the narration

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    1. Thanks so much, Rajlakshmi! Welcome to my blog :)

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  12. You love all things super natural?
    This was brilliant! :)

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    1. Hehehe! I guess I have been watching and reading a lot of spooky stuff nowadays ;) Thank you, Love!

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  13. interesting! a 'bloody' love story!

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    1. Ankita! Such a long time! Was wondering where you where the other day. Good to see you back :) And, thank you!

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  14. Hi Aathira
    I was busy in an urgent work so was away from blogging. Really nice to read you lovely blog after so many days!

    :)

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  15. Aargh !! That's spookiness, but then, you've done a good job out of it !! Vampires rule !

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