Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Over the Horizon

Image courtesy: Google


The sun glistens over the horizon turning the waves into smoldering ashes. I breathe in the saline water that tingles my face, a strange calmness overcoming me. 

The sun will soon be submerged in the endless torrent that was washing the shore and caressing my feet.

Today, I stand independent; excess baggage has been shed and I shall no longer allow others to manipulate me. After what feels like hours, I finally head towards home, tomorrow is going to be a brand new day.  


15 comments:

  1. a very motivating post! and this pic is awesomee!

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    1. Thanks Ankita! Yes, I fell in love with the pic :)

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  2. Every day is brand new and should be treated like one :) Nice write-up!

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  3. Hey athira :D back at ur blog after such a long time bt boy stilll u write soooo wonderful :D :)

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    1. Thanks so much Juhi! Do blog more often. I miss reading you!

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  4. That is a marvelous picture you painted with words and the photo, WOW! Good one, Athira. :)

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  5. Ahh....I want to be her now...stand there and feel what she felt.

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  6. Oozed with optimism and hope.
    Nice one!

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  7. Aaah! Only if someone knows how much I love such a scene. And I'm pretty much eager to taste such strange calmness which your soul just described ;)
    That independent girl has always fascinated me. When she finally heads back home with all that she has acquired and gained it is evident that it is going to be a brand new day and when the sun finally remerges, it will be a brand new beginning!

    P.S. That picture has already hooked me and I'm raring to walk on those cold sands of beaches with my bare feet especially under the light of a full moon :)

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    1. That girl is an inspiration to all of us, right? Thanks so much Stranger :) I love reading your comments!

      I hope you are able to have that moon light walk soon :)

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  8. Now that's the spirit! Love this story :-)

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