Friday, December 5, 2014

Broken Trust

Image courtesy: Google

With each touch, you made music for my ears. Why was it that time spent apart from you always felt like torture? 

It was never meant to be easy; and that's what I loved about us. But no matter what, you took my breath away, each day; kept me grounded to the stark reality called life. 

I still believe destiny played a part, a cruel twist of fate when I broke your trust and you left, only to never return again. 

This post is written for Five sentence fiction for Trust at Lillie McFerrin Writes.


  1. Very well written. Wonder how it'd have shaped up if you were allowed a few more sentences.

    Do drop by mine.


    1. Thank you, CRD! Yes, there is always a scope for a bigger picture, right? I'm hopping on to your blog right away.

  2. i like image so much and i really like your writing style.

  3. Broken trust is always difficult to heal.. Well written!
    Drop by mine as well.. :)

    1. Thanks Ramya! I shall check out your blog too :)

  4. Trust is a TERRIBLE thing to lose, especially if it had belonged to someone you once had a loving, meaningful relationship with, I loved the emotions for response has elicited from your readers. Have a GREAT WEEK with whatever you do.

    I've love for you to comment on my post for this week's prompt word. And if possible to check out my second book, "Micro Fiction - An Anthology" which is a collection of the responses I've written and post links for Lillie's prompt word each week, as well as others. This is NOT A REQUEST for you or anyone else to buy a copy of my book.

    1. Thanks so much, Robin. Indeed, trust is a terrible thing to lose.

      I shall check out your blog too :)

  5. Broken trust is the only thing that will never heal with time. Each sentence was properly utilized. :)

  6. Short and power packed.. good one !

  7. Ouch. This one hurt. You are good!!

  8. Nice - you did a very good job getting that 'pain' across in the 5 sentences allocated.
    Well done.

  9. And a broken heart too..
    Nice one!

  10. A broken trust is almost impossible to mend.

  11. Sad but its the truth! Trust once broken is very difficult to be mended. Well written Aathira :)

  12. Hello I'am Chris From France!!
    this is not a "spam"
    You Have A Wonderful Blog Which I Consider To Be Registered In International Blog Dictionary. You Will Represent Your Country
    "Directory Blogspot" is 15 million visitors! .193 Country. 18000 Websites
    Please Visit The Following Link And Comment Your Blog Name
    Blog Url
    Location Of Your Country Operating In Comment Session Which Will Be Added In Your Country List
    On the right side, in the "green list", you will find all the countries and if you click them, you will find the names of blogs from that Country.
    Imperative to follow our blog to validate your registration.Thank you for your understanding
    Happy Blogging
    I wish you and your family a Merry Christmas
    A small gift for you

  13. This comment has been removed by the author.

  14. Oh! :O
    I wasn't expecting the last line :O
    but nice twist...


Your feedback is always appreciated! Thank you!

Related Posts Plugin for WordPress, Blogger...