Sunday, July 20, 2014

Fireworks

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It's new year's eve 
And I'm out with friends
Watching the fireworks
Light up the night sky

We were so over 
Yet why can't I stop
Thinking about you
Or your love

This was supposed 
To be a new beginning
Yet it feels like 
A final goodbye

Watching the colors fade 
The yellow, red and blue
Until all that's left is plain black
And the smoke lingering around


This post is written for Day 20 of the Ultimate Blog Challenge for July 2014 and NaBloPoMo

19 comments:

  1. Nice one Aathira :) For every new beginning there has to be a final goodbye :)

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    1. Thanks so much Reema :) Yes, at times, saying goodbyes are inevitable.

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  2. I specially liked the last para, Aathira. The specific heed you've given the object in each paragraph brings out the entire post very well :)

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  3. Poem...no comments.I dont understand how to undertand a poem....nce one it seens.

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  4. Beautifully expressed and love each & every line, Aathira. It feels like magic on earth:)

    http://vishal-newkidontheblock.blogspot.com/2014/07/an-orkut-love-story-chapter-20.html

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    1. You have made my day with your comment, Vishal. Thank you! :)

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  5. Ah, such a wonderful composition Aathira! You cast a bewitching spell over the words that they fall into place just like that :)

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    1. Keirthana, I love reading your comments. It never fails to bring a smile on my face :) Thank you!

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  6. loved the last para, esp! great work :-)

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  7. You caught the emotions at their best. This was beautiful

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  8. Very nicely woven poem. The last four lines are superb.

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  9. Sometimes the beginning seems like the end, and sometimes it is the other way round, isn't it ? Nicely woven !

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    1. Spot on with your comment, Sreeja. Thank you! :)

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  10. That was incredibly awesome!
    I’ve fallen for the Philosophy which you expressed so beautifully in your last stanza. The cycle of transitions; from beginning to the end and in the end how it ends. Sigh!

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