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Riding along the mountain roads
Clinging on to you
Fresh air greeting us as we climb higher
Getting crispier as we go
Twists and turns along the way
Some shallow, some steep
My fears disappear with you by my side
The wind messes up our hair
Neither of us could care any less
We are together and that's all that matters
The hum of the bike, the cool atmosphere
Breaks my face into a wide smile
I can smell your hair from behind
There's the scent of wet earth and sweat
That's only belonged to you
There's a cottage waiting for us
Right at the hill top; a tiny alcove
A fire shall crackle tonight
Warming our frozen bodies
As we consume our love
Twilight has bathed us both in a golden sheen
The colors have merged into a bright neon sky
Here time seems to have stopped
As we make our way towards home...
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Simple and lovely Poem. Of Love, passion, and the wonderful
ReplyDeleteMountains and the great atmosphere on the mountains. Good writing. Poetic and passionate at the same time. Keep it up, Aathira.
Thanks so much, Mr. Parsa :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!
DeleteThere is a lot of passion in this Aathira ! It is the first thing I read today. Thank you !
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton, Anita! Means a lot :)
DeleteShivers of pleasure were felt <3
ReplyDeleteMusic to my ears! xoxo
DeleteHow I wish I could be living this poem right now! :)
ReplyDeleteMe too! Sigh :)
DeleteHow I wish I could be living this poem right now! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Hon :)
DeleteWonderfully romantic. Truly
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Thanks Meera!
DeleteLovely! Such a nice piece of poetry! :)
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it. Thanks Reema :)
DeleteBeautiful lines!!
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ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteWow ! Beautifully penned Aathira
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Thanks so much, Afshan!
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