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It was the coldest of winters they had ever experienced in years. The garden was covered in snow and icicles had begun to form on her cherished flowers.
But Sadie was secretly glad for that winter; her entire family was home under one roof once more. Her children and grandchildren, though disgruntled at being stuck indoors, made her house a home.
That night as they all huddled together listening to her stories of a bygone era, Sadie smiled to herself. Tomorrow when the snow melts, they would all leave to resume their lives; but for now, she was truly content.
This drabble is written for Friday Fictioneers- 5th December for the above photo prompt.
The joy of truly being at home. So well expressed Aathira :) I smiled too!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Shanx! Glad that my post brought a smile to your face :)
DeleteNice story! I feel the warmth and love of family.
ReplyDeleteLily
Thanks a lot, Lily!
DeleteVery well written, Aathira, you succeeded in making the reader identify himself with your narration. Yes, when winters are severe all of the whole family is forced to be indoors and then you realize the fun of being together in one place. Keep it up. You write with your soul in what ever you write.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Mr. Parsa. Your words are truly an inspiration for my soul! Thank YOU :)
DeleteWow, with so few words, you have portrayed a house turning into a home.
ReplyDeleteThanks a bunch, K :)
DeleteFamily life certainly is on the change. Bring on the cold winters.
ReplyDeleteIt sure is! Thank you :)
DeleteI love snow!!! I wish it snowed where I live :(
ReplyDeleteIn today's world such moments are precious!!
Me too! Really craving to experience some snow first hand :)
DeleteLoved the mix of both happiness and sorrow. The thought that she would be alone makes me sad.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Raj :) Unfortanately, a lot of Sadies have to make do with what little they have.
Delete"Sadie" as the name sits perfectly into the premise...
ReplyDeleteVery often we neglect our elders who so selflessly gave their younger days for us...
A very thought out...
So true, Satya. It's heart breaking to read some of the true stories that goes on around us.
DeleteDear A.
ReplyDeleteAs I'm missing my kids, spread out all over the place, I envied Sadie her winter. Nicely done.
shalom,
Rochelle
Sometimes the cold weather can truly lock us into that bliss of togetherness - I hope that there will be a few more days till thaw.
ReplyDeleteThis has a truly peaceful feel. Kudos
ReplyDeleteThat was a warm winter story. So many layers to it in such few words. Well done, Aathira! :-)
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