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I watch her walk in the rain, the blue umbrella in her hand threatening to fold backward any moment in the wind. She is dressed in an emerald green dress, but it's wet, clinging to her curvaceous body, the shade in the dark looks almost black.
She waits at the bus stop. Whom is she waiting for? A flash of lightening illuminates her face. I'm not sure if it was the rain, but her face is dripping wet. Is she crying? Or is it my mind playing tricks on me like always?
I don't go and talk to her, though that is what I'm dying to do. She is my addiction, an elixir in my otherwise dry life. The fragrance of wet earth and rain surrounds us. The bus stop is deserted. There is no one but me and her. I want to push the wet hair from her face, I want to know what her skin would feel like beneath my fingers. Will her hands be rough from conducting daily chores? Or will they be soft and supple like the jasmine flowers that she sometimes used to adorn her hair?
I watch a car stop not far away and couple of men getting out and approaching her. I'm angry, yet I do nothing but watch them. There seems to be some sort of argument. After a few minutes, she gets into the car with them. She catches my eye before closing the car's door, a wistful look on her face.
What does she see when she looks at me? My torn clothes, the broken umbrella that has failed to keep even a strand of hair on my head dry or my begging bowl? I bid her goodbye silently; I know she will be back tomorrow. Just like yesterday or the day before. Just like how I know she is going to be cursed for the rest of her life. Like me. We would make a great pair. Me and her. Only if she would realize that.
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A dark tale indeed. Love does not see any barrier nor does it see any logic. They would make a good pair-but both are bound by their fate.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Prasanna! Love has so many shades that we can explore :)
DeleteAs the tale proceeded I had many figures that conformed to the 'I'. But you surprised me at the end. I never thought he was a beggar who was in love with her.
ReplyDeleteI love your narration.
Thank you, My Lady <3 You sure know how to lift my spirits :)
DeleteIntriguing tale, that draws one in. I enjoyed reading it, brilliantly written, well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much!
DeleteLove fails all logic. Beautiful narration and it mad em miss rain more. ;)
ReplyDeleteI was missing rains too as I wrote it. Guess it's evident huh! Thanks Love :)
DeleteThat was a unique twist at the end - one I didn't see coming. Such a sad tale. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Laurel :) Glad I could manage that element of surprise!
DeleteSo much depth and sadness in this tale. Nicely done Aathira.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Inderpreet!
DeleteSome love stories just don't happen. Beautifully moving tale, Athira!
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteI did not see that one coming. Interesting and unique twist. Nicely done, Aathira. :)
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Thanks Shantala!
DeleteTotally unexpected image of the man and woman! Bravo for dealing with a not-so-glamorous-looking love story! Brilliant Aathira :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Vidya! I try to steer away from cliches as much as possible :)
DeleteThis is so beautifully written Aathira. An image of the noir executed in such an amazing way. My take is also the Umbrella:)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ranveer! I liked your take too :)
DeleteThis was an 'u'nspoken,'u'nscalable & 'u'ndefiled love story (;
ReplyDeleteBeautiful !!!
Thank you, Anakha!
DeleteAah... that was a fantastic twist! Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Ruchi :)
DeleteI simply love the way you set the plot, the description.. so elegant and subtle..
ReplyDeleteThis indeed is a good one!
Cheers
Thanks Geetika!
DeleteIt seems like two ends of the spectrum in life! ;) <3
ReplyDeleteIndeed. Thanks Elly!
DeleteAwesome narration.. Just wow!!
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Thanks Meera :)
DeleteAn extremely disturbing story but very well narrated.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Suzy!
Deletewhat a sad tale! in spite of the love, they know they can never be together! beautiful!
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