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Their memories of an earlier life had started fading with time, one before commitments and responsibilities, before their children and grandchildren came along. There were days when he forgot where he had kept his reading glasses and she forgot whether she had taken her medication or not, but together they always stumbled their way towards each other.
That night as she sat combing her hair in front of their bedroom mirror, he got a glimpse of the woman who had won over his heart many years ago, on a night just like this one. He closed his eyes and pictured the way she had looked then, the memory still fresh in his mind if he concentrated hard enough. She had smelt of wild roses and tasted like honey, but the twinkle in her eyes had refused to fade even with time.
This post is written for Five sentence fiction for Fresh at Lillie McFerrin Writes.
Awww... thats so sweet. I hope I and my husband grow old to be like this fictional couple.
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WOW <3
ReplyDeleteah....love is indeed the closest thing to magic.
ReplyDelete:) everlasting love indeed :) lovely
ReplyDeleteVery sweet. Love should be like that. Like whiskey it must mature with time and the older it grows it must be mellowed and satisfying. Well written, Aathira.
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Awww I so envy this love story !
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written love story that moves beyond flesh and time:) That's true romance and love:)
ReplyDeleteLoved the wonderfully written story!!!
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