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He lifted her up and kissed her passionately; marking each detail on his memory. The way the sun's setting rays turned her hair into a shade of golden, how she grasped his hair when he brought down his head to hers before crushing her lips, how she tasted like coffee and wild honey.
He tried to ignore the fact that this was to be their last night together. After being with her for five years, they had come to the mutual decision that the love they had shared between them was no longer there; the only thing that glued them together was the scorching passion that they shared with each other.
Ignoring the growing pang in his heart, he closed his eyes and held her, it was going to be a night of unbridled passion.
This post is written for Five sentence fiction for Scorching at Lillie McFerrin Writes.
P.S. Feels good to write fiction after ages :) Sorry if I sound a little rusty!
Woman! You are in my head... I saw the prompt and I thought of this, slightly different version but the very same meaning :O
ReplyDeleteReally? This was the thing that popped into my head on reading the prompt too! :D I'll look forward to your post :)
DeleteThis story sound eerily familiar to me.
ReplyDeleteLoved the way you have expressed the passion though.
Thanks Love :)
DeleteThe comparison of the taste of her lips to coffee and wild honey was very passionate ! Very well written, capturing the rapture of a passionate kiss in Five Sentences !
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot! :) Glad you liked it.
DeleteCoffee and wild honey combo is very interesting. This story can happen to anyone.
ReplyDeleteIndeed. Thank you, Harini!
DeleteInteresting read indeed. Greetings!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteI liked the part where you mentioned coffee and wild honey. Interesting !
ReplyDeleteThanks Anita :)
DeleteLooks like you're really good at writing fiction.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! Means a lot :)
DeleteSo much I can connect to the story.. beautiful write up..
ReplyDeleteA Rat's Nibble
Glad you could relate to it. Thank you!
DeleteScorching, indeed. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Vinitha! Good to see you here :)
Deleteoooooo loved the passion oozing in your words :)
ReplyDeleteAww! Thanks Hon :)
DeleteWhat an awesome read Athira! Loved it :-)
ReplyDeleteCheers, Archana - www.drishti.co