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I woke up with a start from the nightmare that I kept having over and over every night. It was always the same- that I would die a gruesome death at the stroke of midnight. On which day, still remained a mystery; for all I know it would be days, months or even years before I die.
I glanced at the digital clock near my bedside, that read 11:59 pm bathed in its luminous glow. The last thing I heard as I felt a hard blow behind my cranium was the sound of my own voice screaming; and then, there was nothing.
This post is written for Five sentence fiction for Luminous at Lillie McFerrin Writes.
You, Spooky Spookerson, you.
ReplyDeleteI looked behind me for a second before looking back at the screen.
Following in Phatichar's footsteps eh? :D
Hehehe :D Thank you, PeeVee :) I'm glad that I managed to spook you, even if it was for a teeny weeny bit ;)
DeleteNot visited Phatichar's blog! Damn.. On my way to check it out right now :)
A dream you wouldn't want to come true. :D
ReplyDeleteSpooky indeed!
And the best part was that I didn't even realize that it was a five sentences fiction until the end. You effortlessly packed the punch in just five sentences.
Thanks so much, Pawan :) A nightmare which I pray never comes true!
DeleteNice one Aathira! Great choice of the pic too I must say :D
ReplyDeleteThank you, Shanx :)
DeleteMan, that's creepy. I wish I don't stay up until midnight ever!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Keirthana :)
DeleteOkaayyy...I'm a little confused..
ReplyDeleteDid the last bit really happen or was that just a nightmare?
0_o
As always, I don't think I can ever be a critic.
You're such a beautiful writer, that I absolutely love all your posts :)
I actually meant for it to actually come true, you know ;) A bit on the scarier side.. But now that you've mentioned it, it can be interpreted either ways! So, Thanks to you :)
DeleteAnd you know I love you more :) xoxo
WHY WHY WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
ReplyDeleteI will from now on sleep at 10:30...will pop a few ADVIL so I dont even dream. :P
Hahaha... :D Now, Thank you Red!
DeleteOh wow! This one was awesome. Phatichar would be proud :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Love :) I'm yet to read all his posts... Will definitely check them out :)
DeleteThat's scary but well written.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Saru!
DeleteScary stuff. But nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Beloo :)
DeleteChilling, indeed.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
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