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I felt the metallic taste of blood in my mouth. There was pain. The blood on my dress spread. A sense of floating above my body. That was when I saw her.
My murderer. The other half of my soul. My twin sister.
There wouldn't be any hurt or mistrust again. For neither of us.
This post is written for Day 29 of the Ultimate Blog Challenge for July 2014 and NaBloPoMo.
P.S. It is a 55 Fiction. An attempt in telling a story in just 55 words.
WELL DONE -- great emotion in so few words
ReplyDeleteThank you, Carol :)
DeleteOnce again nicely done :) Must be one helluva task making those creative juices flow every day!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Seeta! Frankly speaking, I'm exhausted! :D
DeleteChilling tale in 55 words, Aathira... :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Anita!
DeleteGripping!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Love :)
DeleteOuch! Reminded me of Sidney Sheldon's 'Master Of The Game', where Eve always wanted to kill Alexandra.
ReplyDeleteOh yes! I've read that so many years ago. Sidney Sheldon does revenge like no one else!
DeleteI second Soumya, reminded me of Master of The Game, it was my favorite of Sheldon's lot.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Keirthana. Sidney Sheldon was the true Master of the Game :) The King of suspense!
Deletechilling!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Payal!
DeleteOh no .. but whyyyyyyyyyyyyy
ReplyDeleteBikram's
I guess we shall never know! The person who is closest to you has the power to hurt you the most, right?
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