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It's new year's eve
And I'm out with friends
Watching the fireworks
Light up the night sky
We were so over
Yet why can't I stop
Thinking about you
Or your love
This was supposed
To be a new beginning
Yet it feels like
A final goodbye
Watching the colors fade
The yellow, red and blue
Until all that's left is plain black
And the smoke lingering around
This post is written for Day 20 of the Ultimate Blog Challenge for July 2014 and NaBloPoMo.
Nice one Aathira :) For every new beginning there has to be a final goodbye :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Reema :) Yes, at times, saying goodbyes are inevitable.
DeleteI specially liked the last para, Aathira. The specific heed you've given the object in each paragraph brings out the entire post very well :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Soumyaa!
DeletePoem...no comments.I dont understand how to undertand a poem....nce one it seens.
ReplyDeleteThanks Prasanth!
DeleteAh, such a wonderful composition Aathira! You cast a bewitching spell over the words that they fall into place just like that :)
ReplyDeleteKeirthana, I love reading your comments. It never fails to bring a smile on my face :) Thank you!
Deleteloved the last para, esp! great work :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot, Uma!
DeleteYou caught the emotions at their best. This was beautiful
ReplyDeleteThanks a bunch, Red :)
DeleteVery nicely woven poem. The last four lines are superb.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Usha Ma'am :)
DeleteYou have made my day with your comment, Vishal. Thank you! :)
ReplyDeleteSometimes the beginning seems like the end, and sometimes it is the other way round, isn't it ? Nicely woven !
ReplyDeleteSpot on with your comment, Sreeja. Thank you! :)
DeleteThat was incredibly awesome!
ReplyDeleteI’ve fallen for the Philosophy which you expressed so beautifully in your last stanza. The cycle of transitions; from beginning to the end and in the end how it ends. Sigh!